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Welcome – thank you for being here. I hope your Thanksgiving holiday was free of zombies and that no blood sucking creatures found you. I am deeply aware of how much I have to be grateful for this year. I’m thrilled at the family and friends who distract me from writing, for example, because there was a time when I had little company. Life is better with noisy people in it, no doubt. I’m also immensely grateful to Ghastly for one sole reason:
Sometimes Ghastly is Right.
We all know that the traditional publishing model in which someone else decided what was publishable is gone. Blogs and digital publishing allow anyone to self-publish. This change gives a lot of writers the opportunity to share their work. For a guy like me, that’s a blessing. But it’s a curse for consumers because publishable (as determined by the traditional publishing industry) related to highly readable. In other words, a publishable story was deemed worthy of someone’s investment of time and money because it had all the essential elements; conflict, a complex character, a major hook that addicted the reader and all the subsequent structural plot points needed to give readers a vicarious experience. Now, anyone with a little free time can put up a blog and post what they consider a story. This is where it gets complicated because there’s a world of difference between typed pages and a STORY. The elements aren’t optional – they’re the way it is and nothing stands between the public and a story that lacks them but a writer’s Ghastly.
So, I’ve learned that the sinking feeling that something’s not quite right with a manuscript may not be a case of self-doubt, but a dose of truth. It’s writer-instinct raising a red flag about the character’s development or the sequence of plot points. Sure, Ghastly twists this in a nasty way and rubs it in my face, but he’s still worth paying attention to. The last thing any writer can afford to do, after all, is fall prey to a delusion that his muse is perfect, that story telling principles don’t apply to him or that his work somehow transcends the requirements of storytelling. Ghastly, I know, is my motivating force behind acquiring new knowledge and putting it in action. He’s forced me to read as a writer, to study, to experiment and to listen. He’s made me a better writer and, for that, I am in his debt.
Sinister – Chapter 46 went live this morning. Ghastly had a lot to say about the chapter. He’s not completely at ease with it, but for the draft we’re in now that’s okay. I’ll listen to his croaking whispers in the revision phase. For now, I’m going to give him a hug and offer him the last turkey sandwich. Sure, he’ll always be my mortal enemy, a hideous visage of self-doubt and deceit. But in the quiet moments before hitting Publish in WordPress, he’s also my all-time-best-pal. For that reason alone, I’ll never banish him completely.
See you soon. Tell your Ghastly thank you and let me know what you think of the story. Peace and wicked dreams. LL
I am totally inspired by indie Sci Fi writer Michael R. Hicks and want to be the horror writer equivalent! Every writer’s gotta have a big dream, right? Thinking of a Things We Crave reboot to launch a series and giving the first book away from the site. (When would I write that? Between conference calls, Sinister sessions, the growing Skin and Bones outline and the other scary stories I’m kind of overextended at this time.) I miss the hero, Eric Wirth, his attitude and ambition, and it would be nice to hang out with a character who didn’t play guitar or have musical ambitions. And I’d love another shot at that story. We shall see…
On Skin and Bones – the little horror story’s been outlined, tossed and outlined again several times now and finally reached a state that feels okay. The copy-writer in me can’t help but explore the cover blurb a bit and this is where it stands right now:
Luke Merrill is a happy 12 year old boy who loves his violin. When his mother dies, his father sends him to Bain Ridge, an exclusive boy’s school surrounded by savage wilderness. The grieving boy struggles to earn a place in his new, music-less world of strict rules and uniforms, relying on the school nurse and one kind hearted teacher for morsels of nurturance. When a mysterious – and deadly – illness invades the school in the middle of winter Luke finds a diabolical force behind it, one that may cost him everything including his own life.
Thoughts? LL
Our scary story is back on track and Sinister – Chapter 45 is now online. For a while, I didn’t think it was going to happen. I hit a rough spot over something that I didn’t see in the outline and, well, I had no idea know how to get through it. Ghastly took great pleasure in this. He spent the week in the writing lair, quietly smug, as I paced about and wished I’d aspired to become a race car driver instead of a writer.
Now, I’m in high spirits about the screw up. The oversight I made in the outlining phase forced me to think much harder about scene purpose, character arcs and the overall emotional impact at this point in a story. The end result is that the pre-midpoint plot sequence is tighter now and, I think, the story will be stronger because of it. (Let me know if you want more info about the oversight.)
The biggest lesson, however, is the realization that an outline and a bunch of notes, no matter how detailed, is in no way a novel. No amount of story planning will ever take the place of actual writing. That’s a humbling lesson for a hard-core, story-planner kind of writer to learn (or maybe re-learn) but more valuable than gold.
So I’m still earning the job title writer. I’m okay with that; and I’m eternally grateful that you’re putting up with me, flaws and all. More to come, so please remember to check under the bed and put out the Gremlin traps. I will see you soon. LL
Hey – New Sinister chapters are on the way. I’m thinking about putting up more than one at a time, however, maybe going from where we’re at to the mid-point. In the mean time, all writers please check Joanna Penn’s interview with Victoria Mixon – it’s free and brilliant. Catch you in a little bit. LL
The scary story continues with Chapter 44 online tonight. One important note – I wrote a blog about subtlety in horror fiction to go along with this chapter. Subtlety is something I really like in horror stories. I’ve always thought that being low key and somewhat delicate can be much scarier than blood and gore. So I wanted to dive into this concept and explore it, but…
I realized that the blog could be a major spoiler. I can’t write about it without pointing out several small details that are part of Sinister’s plot points. Furthermore, it’s all an experiment. If these little bits of story don’t raise tension then I’m sure as hell NOT in a position to say what a good technique it is, right? So the blog isn’t going up. You’re stuck with this lame entry instead, sorry.
If the experiment works, the blog will be in Darkness and Destiny, the story behind Sinister and all the freaky-scary stuff that happened to me which triggered the story and continued while I was writing it.
For now, the boys are in better shape than I am. I’m beat. Ghastly’s waiting on the other pillow and I’m heading his direction in a matter of second. You be safe – keep a light on – and I’ll see you in the light. LL
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